Wednesday, August 28, 2019

How To Write Without Mistakes!

Kia Ora everyone!!

Over the last 2-3 weeks, we have been asked by our lovely teachers to write a Narrative writing piece based on the future and what we would like it to be in the future and why. For my Narrative writing piece, I have chosen to do it on Space. Here is a little bit about it!
"The main mission in this story is to build things on every single planet so people can visit the planets and even maybe live on it. Along the way, the 4 of them (Izzy, Caleb, Jacob and Lily) face a whole lot of different challenges that are risky but worth it at the end."

Down below is my completed piece of Narrative Writing. Please feel free to leave some comments! I would really appreciate it!


                     

Have you ever writted a Narrative story before?

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